Publishedat 21st of September 2018 08:04:49 AMChapter -1
h.e.l.lo, author here,
This is my first attempt to make a novel and my purpose becoming author is to earn money from my hobby, I know money is a taboo thing, but I will be honest to you guys here ^^ . As this is my first attempt maybe you will find many plot holes or mistakes, excuse me for that mistakes and you can leave a review of my novel"s shortcomings in the review section, so I can improve for my self (I hope it"s a constructive review not like " . . . . . . . . " or "This is trash, don"t read . . . " and so on ) ^^ I can not improve if you leave a review like that as I am a new author and new author is tend to make mistake, but you guys can help me to improve by leaving a constructive review or critic .
For the grammar, I know my grammar is suck particularly for the first volume . As English is not my native language, I am creating the chapter with my language first before translated it to English with the help of Machine Translation, afterward I edit the chapter (For the first 38 chapters) .
But now, I am used to write in English directly, maybe the grammar became better a bit but you guys the one who can judge for that as it"s impossible for me to judge it .
Also, you can ask if you have some thing that you don"t understand, of course it"s only till for the latest chapter not for spoiler .
Maybe, at first you guys will think the mc is idiot but it"s character development .
A bit spoiler here if you not yet read the story .
The mc was pampered as he was the only child in his family, so basically he is a spoiled child, yet suddenly world changed as the battle of ascension began . Of course, the mc need to adapt first for the current world as he was spoiled child before and what he want always been granted by his family . as I am a new author so the explanation is vague in the story not the detailed one, so many of you misunderstand and take the mc as idiot .
I want to explain further but it will be to much spoiler for a new reader, You can ask me later in the comment section of this chapter by mention me ^^
h.e.l.lo, author here, .
.
This is my first attempt to make a novel and my purpose becoming author is to earn money from my hobby, I know money is a taboo thing, but I will be honest to you guys here ^^ . As this is my first attempt maybe you will find many plot holes or mistakes, excuse me for that mistakes and you can leave a review of my novel"s shortcomings in the review section, so I can improve for my self (I hope it"s a constructive review not like " " or "This is trash, don"t read . " and so on ) ^^ I can not improve if you leave a review like that as I am a new author and new author is tend to make mistake, but you guys can help me to improve by leaving a constructive review or critic
.
For the grammar, I know my grammar is suck particularly for the first volume . As English is not my native language, I am creating the chapter with my language first before translated it to English with the help of Machine Translation, afterward I edit the chapter (For the first 38 chapters)
.
But now, I am used to write in English directly, maybe the grammar became better a bit but you guys the one who can judge for that as it"s impossible for me to judge it
.
Also, you can ask if you have some thing that you don"t understand, of course it"s only till for the latest chapter not for spoiler
.
Maybe, at first you guys will think the mc is idiot but it"s character development
.
A bit spoiler here if you not yet read the story
.
.
The mc was pampered as he was the only child in his family, so basically he is a spoiled child, yet suddenly world changed as the battle of ascension began . Of course, the mc need to adapt first for the current world as he was spoiled child before and what he want always been granted by his family . as I am a new author so the explanation is vague in the story not the detailed one, so many of you misunderstand and take the mc as idiot
.
I want to explain further but it will be to much spoiler for a new reader, You can ask me later in the comment section of this chapter by mention me ^^.