At around the same time I received a number of reviews for Wolf In Shadow. Some were very good, some were indifferent, but one was downright vile. One of the lines in it struck me particularly. I dread to think of people who look up to men like Jon Shannow. The writer was named Broome.
Twenty years of journalism had taught me not to over-react to criticism. A writer"s work is not his child. It is just work. A work of love and pa.s.sion, but a work nonetheless. Even so I wanted to react in some way. All the characters in my novels are based on real people, and I thought it would be a neat response to use a character named Broome, a man pa.s.sionately opposed to violence who would loathe the hero, but be drawn into his world.
It was in my mind that he would be a cannon fodder character, of little conscquence, who would die early. But, as with so much in the magical world of creative writing, events did not - as you will see - turn out anything like I had planned.
It took only one more little nudge to push me into a second Shannow novel. I was driving home one night, listening to the radio, when the haunting lyric of a new song struck home like an arrow.
The singer was a brilliant new American artiste named Tracy Chapman, and the song spoke of racism and riots, and the appalling violence that has sadly become commonplace in the impoverished inner cities of America. One line had immense power for me...
Across the lines who would dare to go...
I knew who would dare.
I got home around 2 am and immediately switched on the word processor. I had no idea how to get round the obvious death of my hero in the first book, and did not wish to write a prequel. In the end I used the simplest device there is. I began with the words: But he did not die.
David A. Gemmell Hastings, 1995 3301.
SOUTH OF THE PLAGUE LANDS - 2341 AD.
But he did not die. The flesh around the bullet wound over his hip froze as the temperature dropped to thirty below zero, and the distant spires of Jerusalem blurred and changed, becoming snow-shrouded pine. Ice had formed on his beard and his heavy black, double- shouldered topcoat glistened white in the moonlight. Shannow swayed in the saddle, trying to focus on the city he had sought for so long. But it was gone. As his horse stumbled, Shannow"s right hand gripped the saddle pommel and the wound in his side flared with fresh pain.
He turned the black stallion"s head, steering the beast downhill towards the valley.
Images rushed through his mind: Karitas, Ruth, Donna; the hazardous journey across the Plague Lands and the battles with the h.e.l.lborn, the monstrous ghost ship wrecked on a mountain. Guns and gunfire, war and death.
The blizzard found new life and the wind whipped freezing snow into Shannow"s face. He could not see where he was heading, and his mind wandered. He knew that life was ebbing from his body with each pa.s.sing second, but he had neither the strength nor the will to fight on.
He remembered the farm and his first sight of Donna, standing in the doorway with an ancient crossbow in her hands. She had mistaken Shannow for a brigand, and feared for her life and that of her son, Eric. Shannow had never blamed her for that mistake. He knew what people saw when the Jerusalem Man came riding - a tall, gaunt figure in a flat- crowned leather hat, a man with cold, cold eyes that had seen too much of death and despair. Always it was the same. People would stand and stare, first at his expressionless face and then their eyes would be drawn down to his guns, the terrible weapons of the Thunder Maker.
Yet Donna Taybard had been different. She had taken Shannow to her hearth and her home and, for the first time in two weary decades, the Jerusalem Man had known happiness.
But then had come the brigands and the war-makers and finally the h.e.l.lborn. Shannow had gone against them all for the woman he loved, only to see her wed another.
Now he was alone again, dying on a frozen mountain in an uncharted wilderness. And, strangely, he did not care. The wind howled about horse and man and Shannow fell forward across the stallion"s neck, lost in the siren song of the blizzard. The horse was mountain bred; he did not like the howling wind, nor the biting snow. Now he angled his way through the trees into the lee of a rock-face and followed a deer trail down to the mouth of a high lava tunnel that stretched through the ancient volcanic range. It was warmer here and the stallion plodded on, aware of the dead weight across his back. This disturbed him, for his rider was always in balance and could signal his commands with the slightest pressure or flick of the reins.
The stallion"s wide nostrils flared as the smell of smoke came to him. He halted and backed up, his iron hooves clattering on the rocky floor. A dark shadow moved in front of him ... in panic he reared and Shannow tumbled from the saddle. A huge taloned hand caught the reins and the smell of lion filled the tunnel. The stallion tried to rear again, to lash out with iron-shod hooves, but he was held tight and a soft, deep voice whispered to him, a gentle hand stroking his neck. Calmed by the voice, he allowed himself to be led into a deep cave, where a camp-fire had been set within a circle of round flat stones. He waited calmly as he was tethered to a jutting stone at the far wall; then the figure was gone.
Outside the cave Shannow groaned and tried to roll to his belly, but he was stricken by pain and deep cold. He opened his eyes to see a hideous face looming over him. Dark hair framed the head and face and a pair of tawny eyes gazed down at him; the nose was wide and flat, the mouth a deep slash, rimmed with sharp fangs. Shannow, unable to move, could only glare at the creature.
Taloned hands moved under his body, lifting him easily, and he was carried like a child into a cave and laid gently by a fire. The creature fumbled at the ties on Shannow"s coat, but the thick paw-like hands could not cope with the frozen knots. Talons hissed out to sever the leather thongs and Shannow felt his coat eased from him. Slowly, but with great care, the creature removed his frozen clothing and covered him with a warm blanket. The Jerusalem Man faded into sleep - and his dreams were pain-filled.
Once more he fought the Guardian Lord, Sarento, while the t.i.tanic sailed on a ghostly sea and the Devil Walked in Babylon. But this time Shannow could not win, and he struggled to survive as the sea poured into the stricken ship, engulfing him. He could hear the cries of drowning men, women and children, but he could not save them. He awoke sweating and tried to sit. Pain ripped at his wounded side and he groaned and sank back into his fever dreams.
He was riding towards the mountains when he heard a shot; he rode to the crest of a hill and gazed down on a farmyard where three men were dragging two women from their home. Drawing a pistol, Shannow kicked his stallion into a run and thundered towards the scene. When the men saw him they flung the women aside and two of them drew flintkcks from their belts; the third ran at him with a knife. He dragged on the reins and the stallion reared. Shannow timed his first shot well and a brigand was punched from his feet. The knife-man leapt, but Shannow swung in the saddle and fired point-blank, the bullet entering the man"s forehead and exiting from the neck in a b.l.o.o.d.y spray. The third man loosed a shot that ricocheted from the pommel of Shannow"s saddle to tear into his hip.
Ignoring the sudden pain, the Jerusalem Man fired twice. The first sh.e.l.l took the brigand high in the shoulder, spinning him; the second hammered into his skull.
In the sudden silence, Shannon sat his stallion gazing at the women. The elder of the two approached him and he could see the fear in her eyes. Blood was seeping from his wound and dripping to the saddle, but he sat upright as she neared.
"What do you want of us?" she asked.
"Nothing, Lady, save to help you."
"Well," she said, her eyes hard, "you have done that, and we thank you." She backed away, still staring at him. He knew she could see the blood, but he could not - would not - beg for aid.
"Good day to you," he said, swinging the stallion and heading away.
The younger girl ran after him; blonde and pretty, her face was leathered by the sunlight and the hardship of wilderness farming. She gazed up at him with large blue eyes.
"I am sorry," she told him. "My mother distrusts all men. I am so sorry."
"Get away from him, girl!" shouted the older woman, and she fell back.
Shannow nodded. "She probably has good reason," he said. "I am sorry I cannot stay and help you bury these vermin."
"You are wounded. Let me help you."
"No. There is a city near here, I am sure. It has white spires and gates of burnished gold.
There they will tend me."
There are no cities," she said.
"I will find it." He touched his heels to the stallion"s flanks and rode from the farmyard.
A hand touched him and he awoke. The b.e.s.t.i.a.l face was leaning over him. "How are you feeling?" The voice was deep and slow and slurred, and the question had to be repeated twice before Shannow could understand it. "I am alive - thanks to you. Who are you?" The creature"s great head tilted. "Good. Usually the question is what are you. My name is Shir- ran. You are a strong man to live so long with such a wound."
"The ball pa.s.sed through me," said Shannow. "Can you help me to sit?"
"No. Lie there. I have st.i.tched the wounds, front and back, but my fingers are not what they were. Lie still and rest tonight. We will talk in the morning."
"My horse?"
"Safe. He was a little frightened of me, but we understand each other now. I fed him the grain you carried in your saddlebags. Sleep, Man."
Shannow relaxed and moved his hand under the blankets to rest on the wound over his right hip. He could feel the tightness of the st.i.tches and the clumsy knots. There was no bleeding, but he was worried about the fibres from his coat which had been driven into his flesh. It was these that killed more often than ball or sh.e.l.l, aiding gangrene and poisoning the blood.
"It is a good wound," said Shir-ran softly, as if reading his mind. "The issue of blood cleansed it, I think. But here in the mountains wounds heal well. The air is clean. Bacteria find it hard to survive at thirty below."
"Bacteria?" whispered Shannow, his eyes closing.
"Germs ... the filth that causes wounds to fester."
"I see. Thank you, Shir-ran."
And Shannow slept without dreams.
Shannow awoke hungry and eased himself to a sitting position. The fire was burning brightly and he could see a large store of wood stacked against the far wall. Gazing around the cave, he saw it was some fifty feet across at the widest point and the high domed ceiling was pitted with fissures, through which the smoke from the fire drifted lazily. Beside Shannow"s blankets were his water canteen, his leather-bound Bible and his guns, still sheathed in their oiled leather scabbards. Taking the canteen, he pulled clear the bra.s.s- topped cork and drank deeply. Then in the bright firelight he examined the bullet wound in his hip; the flesh around it was angry, bruised and inflamed, but it looked clean and there was no bleeding. Slowly and carefully he stood, scanning the cave for his clothes.
They were dry and casually folded atop a boulder on the other side of the fire. Dried blood still caked the white woollen shirt, but he slipped it on and climbed into his black woollen trousers. He could not buckle his belt on the usual notch, for the leather bit into his wound, bringing a grunt of pain. Still, he felt more human now he was clothed. He pulled on socks and high riding boots and walked to where his stallion was tethered at the far wall. Shannow stroked his neck and the horse dropped his.head and nuzzled him in the chest. "Careful, boy, I"m still tender." He half-filled the feed-bag with grain and settled it over the stallion"s head. Of Shir-ran there was no sign.
Near the wood-store was a bank of rough-hewn shelves. Some carried books, others small sacks of salt, sugar, dried fruit and meat. Shannow ate some of the fruit and returned to the fire. The cave was warm and he lay back in his blankets and took up his guns, cleaning them with care. Both were h.e.l.lborn pistols, single or double action, side-feed weapons. He opened his saddlebag and checked his sh.e.l.ls. He still had forty-seven, but when these were gone the beautifully balanced pistols would be useless. Delving deep into the saddlebag he found his own guns, cap and ball percussion pistols that had served him well for twenty years. For these he could make his own powder and mould ammunition. Having cleaned them, he wrapped them in oilskin and returned them to the depths of the saddlebag. Only then did he take up his Bible.
It was a well-thumbed book, the pages thin and gold edged, the leather cover as supple as silk. He banked up the fire and opened the pages at The Book of Habakkuk. He read the section aloud, his voice deep and resonant.
"How long, 0 Lord, must I call for help, but you do not listen? Or cry out to you, "Violence,"
but you do not save? Why do you make me look at injustice? Why do you tolerate wrong?
Destruction and violence are before me, there is strife, and conflict abounds. Therefore the law is paralysed and justice never prevails. The wicked hem in the righteous so that justice is perverted."
"And how does your G.o.d answer, Jon Shannow?" asked Shir-ran.
"In his own way," Shannow answered. "How is it you know my name?"
The huge creature ambled forward, his great shoulders bowed under the weight of the enormous head. He sank to the floor by the fire and Shannow noticed that his breathing was ragged. A thin trickle of blood could be seen coming from his right ear, matting the dark hair of his mane. "Are you hurt?" asked Shannow.
"No. It is the Change, that is all. You found food?"
"Yes. Some dried fruit in crystallised honey. It was good."
"Take it all. I can no longer stomach it. How is your wound?"
"Healing well - as you promised. You seem in pain, Shir-ran. Is there anything I can do?"
"Nothing, Shannow. Save, perhaps, to offer me a little company?"
"That will be a pleasure. It is too long since I sat by a fire, secure and at peace. Tell me how you know me?"
"Of you, Shannow. The Dark Lady speaks of you - and your deeds against the h.e.l.lborn.
You are a strong man. A brave friend, I think."
"Who is this Dark Lady?" countered Shannow, uncomfortable with the compliments.
"She is who she is, dark and beautiful. She labours among the Dianae - my people - and the Wolvers. The Bears will not receive her, for their humanity is all gone. They are beasts - now and for ever. I am tired, Shannow. I will rest... sleep." He settled down on his belly, taloned hands supporting his head. His tawny eyes closed - then opened. "If... when... you can no longer understand me, then saddle your stallion and ride on. You understand?"
"No," replied Shannow.
"You will," said Shir-ran.
Shannow ate some more fruit and returned to his Bible; Habakkuk had long been a favourite. Short and bitter-sweet were his words, but they echoed the doubts and the fears in Shannow"s heart and, reflecting them, calmed them.
For three days Shannow sat with Shir-ran, but although they talked often the Jerusalem Man learned little of the Dianae. What meagre information the creature did impart told Shannow of a land where men were slowly changing into beasts. There were the People of the Lion, the Wolf and the Bear. The Bears were finished, their culture gone. The Wolvers were dying out. Only the Lion people remained. Shir-ran spoke of the beauty of life, of its pains and its glories, and Shannow began to realise that the great creature was dying. They did not speak of it, but day by day Shir-ran"s body changed, swelling, twisting, until he could not stand upright. Blood flowed from both ears now and his speech was ever more slurred. At night in his sleep he would growl.
On the fourth morning Shannow awoke to hear his stallion whinnying in terror. He rolled from his bed, his hand sweeping out and gathering a pistol. Shir-ran was crouched before the horse, his head swaying.
"What is wrong?" called Shannow. Shir-ran swung - and Shannow found himself staring into the tawny eyes of a huge lion. It advanced on him in a rush and leapt, but Shannow hurled himself to his right, hitting the ground hard. Pain lanced his side, but he swivelled as the lion surged at him, its roaring filling the cave.
"Shir-ran!" bellowed Shannow. The lion twisted its head and for a moment Shannow saw the light of understanding in its eyes... then it was gone. Again the beast leapt. A pistol shot thundered in the cave.
The creature that had been Shir-ran sank to the floor and rolled to its side, eyes locked to Shannow"s own. The Jerusalem Man moved forward and knelt by the body, laying his hand upon the black mane.
"I am sorry," he said. The eyes closed and all breathing ceased.
Shannow laid aside his pistol and took up his Bible. "You saved my life, Shir-ran, and I took yours. That is not just, yet I had no choice. I do not know how to pray for you, for I do not know if you were man or beast. But you were kind to me, and for that I commend your soul to the All-High." He opened his Bible.
Laying his left hand on Shir-ran"s body, he read, "The Earth is the Lord"s, and everything in it, the world, all who live in it, for he founded it upon the seas and established it upon the waters. Who may ascend the Hill of the Lord? Who may stand in his Holy place?. He who has clean hands and a pure heart, who does not lift up his soul to an idol, or swear by what is false: He walked to the trembling stallion and saddled him. Then he gathered what remained of the food, stepped into the saddle and rode from the cave.
Behind him the fire flickered ... and died.
CHAPTER TWO.
THE CITY OF AD - 9364 BC.
The Temple was a place of great beauty still, with its white spires and golden domes, but the once tranquil courtyards were now thronged with people baying for the blood sacrifice.
The white tent at the entrance to the Holy Circle had been removed and in its place stood a marble statue of the King, regal and mighty, arms outstretched.
Nu-Khasisatra stood in the crowd, his limbs trembling. Three times had the vision come to him and three times had he pushed it aside.
"I cannot do this, Lord," he whispered. "I do not have the strength."
He turned away from the spectacle as the victim was brought out, and eased his way through the crowds. He heard the new High Priest chant the opening lines of the ritual, but he did not look back. Tears stung his eyes as he stumbled along the corridors of white marble, emerging at last at the Pool of Silence. He sat at the Pool"s edge; the roar of the crowd was muted here, yet still he heard the savage joy which heralded the death of another innocent.
"Forgive me," he said. Gazing down into the Pool, he looked at the fish swimming there and above them his own reflection. The face was strong and square, the eyes deep-set, the beard full. He had never considered it the face of a weak man. His hand snaked out, disturbing the water. The sleek silver and black fish scattered, carrying his reflection with them.
"What can one man do, Lord? You can see them. The King has brought them wealth, and peace; prosperity and long life. They would tear me to pieces." A sense of defeat settled upon him. In the past three months he had organised secret meetings, preaching against the excesses of the King. He had helped the outlawed Priests of Chronos to escape the Daggers, smuggling them from the city. But now he shrank from the last commitment; he was ashamed that love of life was stronger than love of G.o.d.
His vision swam, the sky darkened and Nu-Khasisatra felt himself torn from his body. He soared into the sky and hovered over the gleaming city below. In the distance a deeper darkness gathered, then a bright light shone beyond the darkness. A great wind blew and Nu trembled as the sea roared up to meet the sky. The mighty city was like a toy now as the ocean thundered across the land. Huge trees disappeared under the waves, like gra.s.s beneath a river flood. Mountains were swallowed whole. The stars flew across the sky and the sun rose majestically in the West.
Looking down upon the city of his birth, Nu-Khasisatra saw only the deep blue-grey of an angry sea. His spirit sank below the waves, deeper and deeper into the darkness. The Pool of Silence was truly silent now, and the black fish were gone. Bodies floated by him... men, women, tiny babes. Unenc.u.mbered by the water, Nu walked back to the central square.
The statue of the King still stood with arms outstretched, but a huge black shark brushed against it. Slowly, the statue toppled striking a pillar. The head sheared off and the body bounced against the mosaic tiles.
"No!" screamed Nu. "No!"
His body jerked, and once more he was sitting by the Pool. Bright sunlight streamed above the temple and doves circled the wooden parapets of the Wailing Tower. He stood, swept his sky-blue cloak over his shoulder and marched back to the Courtyard of the Holy Circle.
The crowd was milling now and the priests were lifting the victim"s body from the flat grey sacrifice stone. Blood stained the surface, and had run down the carved channels to disappear through the golden vents.