Dear readers!In your comments, I came across a few questions that are of burning interest.
Then I will answer some of them, as well as share my opinion on how the plot is built.
Q: Who is the main ML - David, Daniel or someone else? Daniel has managed to overshadow his brother for several chapters, what does the author want to achieve with this?
A: I"ll start with the last one. I specifically gave Daniel the opportunity to reveal himself as a character, so that later on his actions would have logic and would be understandable. Each hero is a person, he has his own character, his own motivation. In my opinion, even minor characters deserve to have their own personality, and not just be extras for the two main characters.
David, even being the main character, has his own strengths and weaknesses, like any other person. He is not the all-powerful invincible Rambo, from the slightest touch of who all enemies are being slain to pieces. Even in mysticism, there must be a drop of adequate reality. Therefore, he may be right, or he may be wrong, but he has his own reasons for all his actions.
Q: What is Daniel"s strange power to manipulate women? Is he a pervert?
A: As one of the attentive readers correctly noted, Daniel possesses the skills of hypnosis. Moreover, very cool hypnosis, which he actively uses. Here you have the situation with Corey and a conversation with Elena (a scene in the winter garden that Elena saw was nothing but a vision caused by Daniel"s hypnosis). And, of course, he showed himself in all his glory by taking care of the host lady Juliette. However, these are not all of his talents. You will learn about his other talents in the next arch.
Q: The last chapters have become boring. Do something with the plot.
A: Thank you for the feedback, but the plot goes the way it goes. Virtually every chapter contains small clues (and sometimes very large ones), having collected which, you can guess the main secret. By the way, a couple of readers were incredibly close to it. But now no one will have the a.s.sumption that Mr. Lee is a Master. Obviously, he is not. But I do not claim that he does not have his own secrets. Practically every chapter has a reference to the following events that will occur in the future.
And now the main question,
Q: WHO IS A MASTER ????
A: You will learn about this in the next part, which will be the final of the second volume.
Thank you for your attention and all the best!
The next part is the Fall of Lee Pharmaceuticals.