Answer to "concerns" and summary to skip Volume I
First of all, thank you for taking the time to read this fanfic it is my first try at writing.
I don"t plan to modify the novel as I like to think that I"m improving from chapter to chapter and there should be some value on that, but I would like to clarify some ideas that I have seen in the comments and reviews and to provide a summary to help avoid the first volume that many people have trouble reading or find annoying, so spoilers ahead.
- While the MC is punished for been lazy, the judge-ent.i.ty did not want him to learn from it, he just wanted to relieve his own anger or frustration on a bad day at work that suddenly became unbearable while dealing with the last soul of the day.
- The MC do not keep his personality while pa.s.sing through his punishment. He just kept the memories of anime, movies and comics/manga to realize where he is and that he cannot enjoy anything in that life.
- From the very first life of his punishment he starts to forget even those memories and in desperation he created his memory palace to keep the only pleasure available to him.
- During his first life, he only stored the sword method in his memory palace along with the note that he learned it on the first part of his punishment.
- During his second life, he only stored the most basic spells that Emiya used on Fate Stay Night along with the note that he learned them on the second part of his punishment.
- The first thing he does, as he reincarnates as a baby n.o.ble in Lukedonia, for his third life is to enter his soul memory palace. He then, starts forgetting everything he experience on his two previous lives and even the animes, movies and comics/manga that he had memorized by heart. But the memory of entering the soul memory palace remains and he manage to retain the idea of language as he continues to watch cartoons.
- Now the MC is a child in all senses, he might have the idea of language but he does not understand the language his parents use, he only remember the language in which his collection is recorded.
- He knows that he was punished for been lazy because it is written on the sword method and the spells as the only two entries that are different from everything else in his collection. So he understand that he might be living in a fantastic world and life could be worth working hard for.
- I"m working with the idea that the n.o.bles had the same pyche that corresponds to their physical appearance. This is, if the n.o.ble looks like a 5 year-old boy then he had the mentality of a 5 year-old even if he has been alive for 15 years as a n.o.ble in Lukedonia.
- Many are "concerned" with his slow training, training the sword for an hour as a 5 year-old without being supervised or forced to, well I think is already quite amazing.
- While growing up, he had enjoyed watching his collection of anime, movies, novels, manga and comics with the mentality of a child getting many weird ideas and influences that would be fadding away as he grows and matures.
- He knows he is in the n.o.blesse world, because he had an incomplete copy of the webtoon recorded in his collection.
- In Lukedonia he had always been encoraged by kind people and never met any kind of abuse or trickery, as the traitors are already gone from Lukedonia you can think of it as a sort of utopia.
- While he was 50 years old, looking like an 8 year-old human, he obtained Frankenstein"s diary along with many of his books and the energy blood, telepathy and telekinesis method of Raizel"s family.
- He forged his work ethic based on Frankenstein"s experimentation ideas.
- It was until he met Rael at age 100 (looking like a 13 year-old kid) and suffering a beating that he was inspired to purify his blood and developed his "bloodbot". It was also around this time that Seira and Regis were born.
- His blood purification was successful, but the bloodbut he created seemed out of his control, fortunately without side effects.
- He developed his blood energy method based on the spells from Fate Stay Night and the manuals from Raizel"s family. Materialing swords and chains.
- He left Lukedonia for his coming of age ceremony when he was 190 years old, n.o.bles are considered adults at 200 years of age which is also the time when the awakening occurs.
- He visited haunted places and discovered that his bloodbot devoured the negative emotions as soon as he was influenced by them providing his blood energy with dark attributes.
- The dark attributes were not hungry and corrosive as the Dark Spear, but meak and calming providing a paralizing effect.
- After nearly 5 years his bloodbot was able to work through his blood energy and he proceed to feed it with the negative emotions of ghosts and vengeful spirits saturating the bloodbot and forcing it into an evolution.
- The bloodbot evolves into a soul weapon before his coming of age ceremony providing time to adapt to his new powers before awakening. The new soul weapon "Sombra" provides his blood energy with paralizing effect and s.p.a.ce restriccion around the attacked target, the soul weapon takes the form of a hooded long coat with blood paterns along with a pair of wings and a couple of swords floating around him.
- As he had recieved nothing but suport and encouragement from Lukedonia since childhood, and he considers himself part of Lukedonia, he decided to share his research in blood purification and his newly born soul weapon. He is rewarded with training from the family leaders and the promise of a position as family leader for his 300 birthday. Lukedonia is an Utopia and they treat their people with kidness and fairness so there was no danger to get into trouble.
- With the help of Rossaria, which for this fanfic purpose is a rune master, he developed teleportation trough runes and blood energy, much like Klarion the witch boy from DC (a rune arc rotates slowly around him to teleport him to another location - young justice). No useful for battle, but extremly useful for traveling.
- Also with the help of Rossaria and the runes, he managed to create an s.p.a.ce within his soul weapon where he can store items permanently or keep people for short periods of time.
- He accompanies Seira as she leaves Lukedonia for her coming of age ceremony and they become a coupe during their travels.
Well, there you have it... it should be enough to skip the first volume and go directly to the second one which I think is much more readable. Also it answers most of the "concerns" found on the comment and review sections, hopefully...
Anyway, I would like to thank you again for reading.
Regards,